oh noo presentation :O

Assalamualaikum peeps :)

I had a presentation about NON LINEAR TEXT change to LINEAR TEXT . so here's the thing , I hate to do the essay . when you need to discuss it and you don't agree with it but you need to realized this is group assignment , so hurmmmm -..-

I need to convert this table and write into an essay .

Hours spent on activities by different age groups in Someland
Activity                        Age	Teens	20s	30s	40s	50s	60s	70s +
Watching TV/videos	1,200	700	400	500	600	700	1,100
Socialising with        4 or less people	150	150	300	250	250	200	200
Socialising with        4 or more people	350	350	50	50	25	25	25
Doing individual exercise	150	100	200	200	50	75	150
Doing group exercise/sport	450	350	200	150	50	0	0
Watching movies in cinemas	100	75	50	25	25	50	75

   

 Hours spent on activities by different age group in Someland

 The above table illustrates the hours spent on leisure activities between age teenagers to 70s above in Someland. It shows the fluctuating and decreasing hours spend on activities. (OV+CI) 

The most popular activities is watching television and videos which decrease from teenagers to 30s but rising back at the age 40s until 70s. The mass media broadcast many interesting programmes that most attracted people to watch it. (KF1) 

     Because of 60s above does not have enough energy, there make the activity of doing exercises dropped rapidly to zero compared to other activities.  (KF2) 

    Obviously, we can see that the constant hours spent from 30s to 50s in all activities because of the commitment in their works and mostly they more like to be in cyber world. (KF3) 

   In a nutshell, the slump in activity of doing exercise because of the uses in energy is lesser when they getting old. Hopefully government would encourage people by joining the ‘Sport for Health’ campaign in order to attract citizens live in healthy life. (Pi+Pii)

CI - Controlling ideas
OV - overview
KF - keyfeatures
Pi - prediction
Pii - proposal

this essay has been rewrite by us , previously , it is not quite okayy . so the other groups should get the compliment because they have elaborate the information in the table so well . well done fellas !